Hey there Jonathan, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
I liked how you made the writing stand out using the highlight tool. I also liked how you added extra information.
I think that Sky Brown winning a bronze medal is really cool! I've never learnt how to skateboard but it looks fun. Sadly, I wasn't able to watch Sky Brown skateboard but she sounds like she's really good at it.
To improve, you could add an introduction above the google drawing (assuming that it is one) and at the end of the blog you could say bye.
Did you watch Sky Brown skate? What country is she from? What is your favourite sport in the Olympics?
Cya later Jonathan, keep it up! -Sincerely, Amelia.
I liked how you made the writing stand out using the highlight tool. I also liked how you added extra information.To improve, at the end of the blog you could say bye. Lucas
Hey there Jonathan, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you made the writing stand out using the highlight tool.
I also liked how you added extra information.
I think that Sky Brown winning a bronze medal is really cool!
I've never learnt how to skateboard but it looks fun.
Sadly, I wasn't able to watch Sky Brown skateboard but she sounds like she's really good at it.
To improve, you could add an introduction above the google drawing (assuming that it is one) and at the end of the blog you could say bye.
Did you watch Sky Brown skate?
What country is she from?
What is your favourite sport in the Olympics?
Cya later Jonathan, keep it up!
-Sincerely, Amelia.
I liked how you made the writing stand out using the highlight tool.
ReplyDeleteI also liked how you added extra information.To improve, at the end of the blog you could say bye. Lucas